i kissed you on the lips because i loved you.
i kissed your ear because you were special.
i kissed you on the nose and laughed.
i kissed your cheek because i thought we were friends.
i kissed your forehead because i wanted to comfort you.
i kissed your neck because i wanted you.
i kissed you on the shoulder because at that moment you were wonderful.
i played with your hair because at that moment i knew i couldnt live without you.
i held your hand because i was happy.
i put my arms around your waist because you were mine and i needed you.
i hugged you because i cared.
i nibbled on your ear because i knew you liked it.
i smiled at you because i liked you.
i winked at you because i was a flirt.
i looked around a lot because i was hiding the fact that i loved you.
i kissed you on the side of your lips because i knew you would always be mine.
i licked my lips and you knew i wanted to be kissed.
i let out that single tear drop because i was losing you.
i cried because i had lost you.
i died because i couldnt live without you.
Author notes
option 3- in a nut shell love is being able to read the person and understand and willin to put urself on the line
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A great poem that narrates a love story and the most important thing about this poem is, despite of it's simple language it can attract the reader.
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A very compelling piece. A great Love story.
Although the last two lines were well placed and brought the poem to an amazing but Sad climax.
Thank you for entering The Contest.
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kewlness
This was amazing. I loved how you had all these actions and you explained them. Awesome! Great write and Great job!!! -
How sad!! It seems like you just poured out your heart and then that person just ripped it away. Thats what hurts the most. I loved the way you wrote this poem and you did an amazing job!
Ashley
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Yup, great indeed. so much emotion, seems overflowing! well done and good luck. liked it very much.
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Wow this was....I don't know, so sad - So amazing...It really does express how these things tend to go - I loved how you showed how at first you were so in love and you knew he/she was yours forever and as it went along it became less and less so and finally that person was no longer there and you died from the loss. This is one of the truest writes i've seen today...It was amazing and stirred a great deal of emotion from me. I really loved this piece. I wish you the best of luck in my contest.
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Great Write
You have expressed yourself and your position on this relationship so well. you provided wonderful imagery to the reader and thank you so much for sharing your talent....Michael
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aww!
WOW!! This write is so fucking sad at the end.. Its really good and I fucking love the ending!! Its fucking awesome and you did a great job making this write!!! Keep up the great work!! Good luck in my contest!
Shannon*Leah
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you know i liked it. who inspired it? was it jason? or tattershaw?
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........Love......
I was never the big one on love. I probably wouldn't know love if It slapped me in teh face. But I can tell that this is love.....
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Powerful
WOW This is such a Powerful piece of writting
filled with such real adn strong emotions!
I loved every single line in this Powerful
write. Thank You
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