Behold, my miracle,
from conception to infinty.
To be told-
you could not be;
and yet, here you are.
Each day, a challenge,
but also a promise...
a promise of the infinite future.
I watch you grow;
from cuddles
to a "young" young-man.
Within my heart,
my soul;
always to be my baby.
Let me say, every day,
every moment;
I may not always say it,
I may not always show it...
you make me proud
and I love you so very much.
And I thank my lucky stars
to behold,
my miracle.
Author notes
(Ugh, I can't write anything lately) That said...
This piece is about my son, who is 9 at the time. I was told that I was sterile and would never have children, and all of a sudden I was pregnant. During that time, I almost lost him 3 times and went through one hell of a pregnancy that destroyed part of me as well. Would I change it? No way! He is my miracle, literally, so to him, I dedicate this piece.
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A contest entry
- Masterpiece from my favorites by Virgoan.
435 points, ended April 11, 2007, 9 entries
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This is really lovely. This masterpiece you've dedicated splinters my soul as if my Mother had given me thy words.
I love these lines:
Let me say, every day,
every moment;
I may not always say it,
I may not always show it...
you make me proud
and I love you so very much.
A very heartfelt and striking masterpiece.
Thank you for entering and I wish you all the best in the contest. Keep writing.
~VIRGOAN~
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Beautiful
God bless and what a heart felt write from my favorite AP mate. You should run out of things to write more often! I love this piece as I can relate to most of it. More importantly I feel your raw emotion flowing from these words. Love, Rhon
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Certainly a miracle for sure.
I am sure he will cherish this
always. I am sure he knows how
much you love him, and how proud
you are, but this just shows how much.
Jeannie
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A true Miracle
A touching and well written poem that speaks from the heart, You have crafted well here, I really enjoyed the read and the emotions it created, blessings John
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Speaking as a Mom and a soon to be Grandmom, this poem so very much touched my heart and soul!
It's beautifully done and I'm sure your son will treasure this piece forever!
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X
There is nothing on this earth like the love of a mother.
Mine was my best friend, even when I was bad.
She never ever judged me.
Wonderful write sweet lady.
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