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Dark Kiss

In the dark she felt a spy
Inside the heart of night
She feels his lips crawl over hers
Her heart in thread wanting to squirm

Visited in the night
Hes a wonder yet a fright
Victims of his suluctious kiss
A darkened heart not one to miss

Hes a mysterious lover
A wonder but a sight
Love him
Hate him
Make him want you

He victimizes his enemy's
Hes wanted from afar
She fell in love
and he was the one

He kissed her
Those sweet dark lips
Under her tongue
along the breast

She moans
She screams
She feels the wonder of his touch
She wants it now

That dark kiss
Hes a vampire
But yet a lover
A nightmare of affairs

Hes loved many with that dark kiss
And made them want more
But all he gives is a one night stand
Then leaves with the moonlight dawn

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  • Vampyric Kitten
    May 8, 2007
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    Sent tingles up my spine (which is hard to do) I loved this. it's simply amazing

    ~Kitten~


  • MissingNin-Of-Night
    March 27, 2007

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    wowzers

    That was incredible!!!!! This is from ur home girl at school using ur account................Dani
    she says it's ok to use her account ^.^


  • KittieLyyn
    March 26, 2007

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    wow. that was fucking gawjus...i loved it.
    i loved the last stanza

    Hes loved many with that dark kiss
    And made them want more
    But all he gives is a one night stand
    Then leaves with the moonlight dawn

    purely amazing.