Confusion and doubt
clouding my thinking
Searching for answers
not really sure of the question
Feelings long forgotten
being brought to the surface
Afraid to embrace them
fearing I might lose again
Sweet mystery of life,
have mercy on my tortured soul
clear my head of useless thoughts
Empower me to fulfill my destiny
Let me taste the sweet wine
and no more the bitter fruit
Toasting to new beginnings
Calm my restless spirit
through the storms that create
disruption
Help me to honor my being
Teach me the words to my
Life’s song
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This line is powerful and passionate.....
"Sweet mystery of life,
have mercy on my tortured soul
clear my head of useless thoughts
Empower me to fulfill my destiny"
Envokes strong emotion... loved it very much.
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QUESTIONING YET SOFT AND TENDER
I also feel at times the questions come and no answers but with patience (of which I have little these days) if not the answers at least a little peace will find its way to us.
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Stand and be heard!~!
wow. beautiful work. Inspiring and draws the reader in. I've read a couple of your works..I really enjoyed your 'author page'.
Continue with the out pouring of heartfelt words.
Peace/Mia
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Poem with a soul
This poem is very interesting and has life in it. I appreciate the poet for having produced such a nice work of art. A poem with soul with Soulful woman... WoW! keep it up dear. -
"Teach me the words to my
Life’s song"
I love that line...it shows a measure of trust that I love to see, and long for in my own life. There is much in this that makes me think...usually that's a good thing, but it's reminded me of something I've lost. It doesn't take away the fact that this is a great write though. Nicely done sweetie
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Now, this is what I'm talking about. You bring everything to bear in this one. The spirit is shining, speaking of singing! Three very pleased bunnies for this.
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Sweet, deep, and I am in total amazement of this write...
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more an inward reflection i see. i like this a lot.
"Searching for answers
not really sure of the question" - i think that always happens...
"Teach me the words to my
Life’s song" - sounds like confusion.
this is lovely
x Con x
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this is very very deep..i read this twice and each time i felt something different..well done love this is beyond the word amazing far far beyond its perfection
laura xxx
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