In the middle of the night
I reach for you
dreams arousing me
The taste of you still on my lips
your scent still on my body
I seek you in the satiny
sheets of our earlier lust
Gently stroking your back
I softly kiss your neck
you start to move
as I whisper to you
“I need you”
I push my body against yours
turning around ,you reach for me,
pulling me closer
Our mouths searching
heated tongues meeting in
hot and quivering breath
Your skin feeling warm and sweaty
as I become wet and eager
Our bodies demanding more
No longer satisfied with the surface of me
you enter, claiming what you know is yours
I feel your fire inside me
heat penetrating my skin
We savor the tastes, sights, and sounds
of our joining
there are no hiding places
I arch my body for your comfort
drawing you in closer, deeper
our slow rhythm moving into
urgent and demanding thrusts of passion
You scream my name as we reach that plateau
I answer your call, meeting your thrusts
In that one moment our eyes lock and hold
I see deep into your soul
as we venture over that threshold
exhausted and satiated
We remain lost in our oneness
In a list
A contest entry
- Seduce Me With Words by Sweetlilskye.
425 points, ended April 3, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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With your words, it would be hard to believe anyone can be exhausted and satiated cause one would want to come back for more. You sure have a way with words. Great poem.
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sensual imagery at its best.........
Being a married man, I want to explore this area of poetry. I have never written any erotic poetry, but I want to learn how to write like this. Most of what I have written is about nature or spirituality. The more I read of your work, the more I learn. I just love this site, because for someone who has only been writing poetry for a short time, it's exhilarating to discover just how much I enjoy reading and writing poetry, and branching out creatively. I've always loved to write. You're such an inspiration for me.
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Very sensual and erotic, without being smutty.
Waking up sex is sometimes the best and most intimate.
'Thunk!' That was the sound of wood hitting my desk, lol
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This was fantastic, erotic, beautiful. Thank you so much for entering my contest, i could feel the passion rising, the culmination of the love building. This was a beautiful read.
~A Heart's Hope Lies With Belladonna~ -
Passionate
"lost in our oneness" a beautiful line
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Breathtaking
A beautiful, passionate and sensual write. -
Beautifully oozing with sensual romance
"We remain lost in our oneness" God just in the ending I wanted to give yu full applause. What a beautifully dreamy and romantic way to end this write. Yes lust being prominent but with just the right amount of love behind it. This was nothing short of beautiful and leaves a sigh in the heart of any lover who appreciates full well each and every line you have written here. Awesome job! BRAVO!!!!!
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DAYAM!!!
SMOKIN with this one. Turn off the furnace...no farther heat is required here lol. Sexy & steamy & oh-so-hot!!
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wow
I love it. Awesome job. -
ohhh you dirty devil lol this is amazing i esp loved "I see deep into your soul
as we venture over that threshold
exhausted and satiated
We remain lost in our oneness" that was just utterly wow...well done love this really is outstanding xx
laura xxx -
loved it!
I absolutely loved it! amazing read.
I love sex poems that are detailed but not just to the point using "F-ing you" and "F U"
I like definitions and this one definatly had it.
well I'm off have a good day.
::huggs&kisses::
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Oh love the title and pic in this....what a gorgeous, HOT HOT visual this brings to mind...sensual, seductive, passion, lust, all gorgeous...Now I am off to take a COLD shower...HOT HOT HOT!!!
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