The oasis of love
is waiting, anticipating
for the two young lovers
to drink her,
to plunge in,
to empty themselves out
as the oasis of love
is ready, so eager
for the two excited lovers
to discover her passion,
to share her compassion,
to explore her creation
but the oasis of love
is now with a solitary me
as my lover found an ocean of lust
so in this oasis of love
I drink alone,
I plunge alone…
…and I drown alone.
A contest entry
- Titles For Everyone!!! by AllYoullNeverHave.
450 points, ended April 13, 2007, 23 entries
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Comments
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hmmmm, interesting! I liked it, thank you for the entry!
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interesting how you've compared love to an oasis, very nice, i like this alot and Ty for entering, and good luck
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Wow! This is amazing. I can kind of relate in a way to having someone you "love" leave you for someone else. This is amazing. The emotions run strong in the piece. It's very sad, and unfortunately something many can relate to. I love the analogy you made between love and an oasis. Very creative. Good job. Thanks for entering. Best of luck to you!
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