life isn't worth losing
over something small
you won't know where your going
after ending it all
will you just be a ghost
standing over your body
seeing everybody
just flat out bawling
or will you be forever gone
never saying your last goodbyes
what do you think your mother would say
what emotion would play through her eyes
so please my friend
though i know you not
think about it first
before ending it all
A contest entry
- give me a reason to keep living by allfaith.
315 points, ended April 2, 2007, 20 entries
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315 points, ended April 2, 2007, 41 entries
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this was truly an inspirational poem with a much needed message, great write, thanks for entering and best of luck in my contest.
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love this poem so much
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