All of your words
All of your lies
Give me the fire to fuel my poetry
I can say whatever I want
You have no line of defense
Your rights are taken
Can't say shit to me
Can't touch me
I get you with my indifference
The worst of possible revenge
I'll turn my nose at the sight of you
Won't laugh at your downfall
Just as you had done mine
Just as you had watched me
I'll only watch
Secretly knowing the fact that you need me
There's no need to be mad
All the shit you've done to me
You’re the one who's going to pay
I have nothing to answer for
Your words
Your actions
That causes your downfall
For once I’m not the one to blame
For once no one will feel sorry for you
For once in a lifetime you can't play the victim
Now you’re in the dark
Left to face all the issues
Can't run away this time
You have to deal with your own shit
I'm not the one to dig you out
When it was you that dug your own pit
Here's some food for thought
I hope you learned something
Just when you had me down
I got right back up
I'll flip you the bird
And shout "I DON'T GIVE A FUCK!"
In a list
A contest entry
- paybacks a b****h. by Lady Lust.
450 points, ended May 20, 2007, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ///Pain//// by Andi..
380 points, ended April 27, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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NICE!!!! great job on this one!
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this is definately goin in the running for gold!
very well done
and dont worry too much about the swearing,it just brings out the anger even more!!!
3 thumbs up
♥ Dani
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good
i like it alot.good luck in the contest.
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First: Typo in your title.
And this is DQed for too much swearing, a poet can articulate his/herself without resorting to foul and pointless language to this extent.
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Wow. You really are mad right now!
Well, this was amazing. I can so relate to this, it's almost not even funny. I can sense a lot of anger in here, and also a lot of sadistic pleasure, cuz it's (like the title says) your revenge.
My favorite part: Just when you had me down
I got right back up
I'll flip you the bird
And shout "I DON'T GIVE A FUCK!"
Haha. I love that.
Great write Trixie!!
~Jackie
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*pokes her* touched you hehe loved it!
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I love this poem, I can feel exactly what you are feeling, I love that when I'm reading poetry. You are a great poet, keep up the awesome work.
~Alix
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awesome
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thank you so much I'm glad that you liked it.
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Your welcome
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