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For You My Love

Lifes little changes leaves us longing
to touch,  to hold,  to love each other.

My wish for you would be grand that life
would be kind,  never letting you down never
making you sad or lonly leaving you blue.

If this life so crule would end,  the only life
that could be found,  its you my love which makes
this life worth living.

Setting a standard,  a hope,  a friend,  a love so
beautiful the kind of Eden that Adam would have loved.

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  • Sensual Sapphire
    March 26, 2007

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    If all had hearts as big as yours

    Then the world would be a paradise for all. To think there are people in this world that are loved so much, it is truly a beautiful thing. This would be my wish as well for the one closest to my heart. Love does indeed make the world go round.


  • Sacred Ground
    March 26, 2007

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    This is a very loving write, and soo sweet! Your love for this person clearly shines and it is eveidently heartfelt. Good job!


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    March 26, 2007
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    the poem is sweet. one thing though, i had to highlight it to read it. many do not know that you can do that so you may lose some comments due to that. than you for sharing this with me very much. viyanna rosemarie

    • smoking gun
      March 26, 2007
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      thanks

      don't understand why the highlight it has a white background with black lettering on my end, must have made a mistake somewhere, just some thoughts I had written, thanks for the reply-kirby

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