Lay your head to rest upon my softness
And forget what has come before
You are reborn with my touch
Passion’s fire purging
Past mistakes and nothing more
Keep all of your gentle dreams
Share a few of them with me
Feel my heartbeat race
My skin glisten with sweat
The Lover you want me to be
When the world is filled with darkness
And you’ve lived too hard and fast
Then I will play your gentle light
To guide the way back home
Burning steady til the very last
Never forget that I await you
Here in my most humble bed
To soothe away your pains
To forgive you any sins
And give a place to rest your head.
A contest entry
- Make it sweet or kinky! by okadadokie.
600 points, ended May 7, 2007, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I love that last line....you can imagine it..feel it
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This is very soothing I would have to say. Very well written poem. Nice work. Luck.
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I'm not really sure...sounds great...looks great...it is great...keep up the excellence
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Aw thanks, I do try so hard to please my readers
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words cannot express how much this poem...what the hell...you had me at hello...
love from love
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Thank you so much, that's a wonderful compliment
~Sith
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i have no words .
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No words? Was it that terrible? Well, I did write it around 1 am this morning Perhaps it is bad and I didn't notice
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