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The Night Goddess

The night
Goddess dances
Before the steps
Of new beginnings

A contest entry

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  • SensualWhispers
    March 26, 2007

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    Beautiful

    You've written yet another great write in such few words. Great job.. Good luck in the contest. Kassie


  • Deceits Tears silver member
    March 26, 2007
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    this matched the picture so well great write


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    March 26, 2007
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    Very captivating indeed!

    Thanks for sharing... x

    Love and light,
    Butterfly.

  • phoenixonfire
    March 26, 2007

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    Wonderful!! I also related it to night but differently!! There is a lot of sweetness in this write!! Beautiful!!
    good luck!!
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