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Posture...

Insouciance
            Freedom
                    To
                      Expression
                                  Of
                                    Joys 
                                        Unbounded
                                                  And
                                                      Emboding
                                                              Life...















                                                       
                                                             
                                       

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    March 27, 2007

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    i like this i mean you did a great job on this, it kind of makes sense to me, keep it flowing and that is hard to do with ten words, good luck in the contest


  • troyias silver member
    March 26, 2007

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    Love the form

    beautiful and fluid. Spacking volumes in lines of few works. the form is lovely and uniquie. Well done.

    *Go with God* my nephew,

    Aunt Valerie


  • Lavender Butterfly gold member
    March 26, 2007

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    Very thought provoking and deeply profound. I like the way you have formed your piece. Works well with the wording.

    Thanks for sharing... x

    Love and light,
    Butterfly.

  • phoenixonfire
    March 26, 2007

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    That is nice way to express ur poetic work!! The words are excellent and very deep!!
    A very inspiring pic..aint it??
    Good luck!!
    preets