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Fantasy Eternal

 

 

 

                                                                          

 

 

 

-saut de l'ange-

my fantasy dance

into your eternity.

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

saut de l'ange = a ballet term = angel's jump

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  • penman gold member
    April 6, 2007
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    Excellent

    Very well done. Congrats on the silver. It was well deserved.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    March 26, 2007

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    Beautifully poetic and sublimely unique and original.

    Thanks for sharing... x

    Love and light,
    Butterfly.


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    March 26, 2007

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    Exquisite!

    OH this is just perfect my friend.Exquisite penning. All the best
    Gaylene


  • Cannonsfire
    March 26, 2007

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    What a wonderfully poetic french phrase, angel's leap, that just conjures up all sorts of images, beautifully done is short but still holds emotion and imagery.

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