She is light
So beautiful and pure,
With her I am safe
And always secure.
I stand next to her
And take her hand,
She’ll take me on a journey
Of things so grand.
She is dark
Full of silence and stars,
The dark is shared
Not just hers, its ours.
I take her hand
And follow her there,
I’ll be amazed
Nothing else compares.
Back to back
We face away,
Only black and white
Never gray.
I take both hands
And hold them tight,
I bring them together
The dark and the light.
Black and white
Dark and Light
Blind or Sight
Day or Night
Opposite mirror images
Two sides of a coin,
Welded in the center
The two sides rejoin.
Now she is the moon,
And she is the sun,
She is both,
And also one.
Author notes
Option 9 rules what rules???
A contest entry
- Picture contest lots of options by Mingan Tzar Avarus.
425 points, ended April 17, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Which side are you? the dark? the light? or are you gray?
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This is amazing! i love it.. i think i read it like three times.. maybe four.. lolz.. but i love it.. this is great.. i love how you compared the dark and light, but then you also had the median.i know a lot of people can't exactly choice which side, sometimes, there just needs to be a middle.. and not many people grasp that concept. but ya, like i said, great job.
~DarkAngel
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w00t w00t you made me read it twice. I applaud your use of rhyme and defiantly hope to read more of your writes in the future. Congratulations on an excellent poem. ~Corey~
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HA, so very well done! I love the black-white, dark-light, blind-sight, day-night... did those opposites come easily to you? The shortness of the first lines of vs 1 and 3 is perfect, no more beats is needed, because it's almost a completely standalone phrase. Great job, good luck!
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I love this poem, it might just become my Favorite
I'm dark. My best friend is light.
She guides me through the light and I protect her in the darkness.
Opposite mirror images
Two sides of a coin,
Welded in the center
The two sides rejoin.
Great write hun, keep up the fantastic work
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a really beautiful write. nice!
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Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.
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