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Cotillion

Longing's ecstasy,
prince charming's
waltz awaits,
pillow smothers
the music.

A contest entry

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  • Desire gold member
    March 26, 2007

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    Wow-

    Powerful piece You have penned and what images come to the mind~

    Miss You~~
    ~sigh~

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
    Best wishes to You in the contest
    Many blessings too
    and my Love~ Desire~*~


    • penman gold member
      March 26, 2007
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      Thank you love for making me feeling so happy and sharing these moments.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    March 26, 2007
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    Enchanting and totally captivating!

    Thanks for sharing.... x

    Love and light,
    Butterfly.

  • phoenixonfire
    March 26, 2007

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    Beautifully worded!! Deep and heavenly!!
    Good luck in da contest!!
    Got to enter dis one!!
    preets


    • penman gold member
      March 26, 2007
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      Thank you for the great comment. Good luck in entering.

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