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[ Heartbroken and pained ]

Heartbroken and pained
No tears left to cry
Fearing that life was pre-ordained
One last chance to turn away and die

A glimmer in the night
A shadow before the moon
She turns prepared to fight
Then wonders how he found her so soon

"Baby doll" comes the soft whisper
"Where you go I follow"
Suddenly she just wishes that he'd kiss her
She looks up into eyes so hollow

He looks like a man without a hope
Feral and heartless as a beast
This grizzled man wiser then a pope
Then on her lips his begin to feast

Softly they sink to the ground
His lips on her pale throat
"But what if someones around?"
"Then I'll have reason to gloat"

His deft hands pull off her dress
His tongue moving on bared skin
"I want you" she feels she must confess
Opening his trousers he slides gently within

Her back arches as she lets out a scream
He suddenly stops stricken by fear
The moonlight setting her flesh agleam
"I want you deeper still dear"

So a gentle love they make
Deep in the shadows of moonlight
Her heart he'll never break
As they softly fade out of sight

Author notes

Hmm I believe it is quite clear who I am.

I READ THE RULE BITCHES

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  • Love-Lee
    March 30, 2007

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    Nice

    Yet I am a bit of a skeptic as in I find it hard to believe that a guy would be like this. Then again it is hard for me to believe one wrote it... nice piece, and good luck! We need more men like you in the world!


  • Radiant-Beauty
    March 28, 2007
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    oh my