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They Don't Seem To Understand

They don't seem to understand
I'm so numb inside
I can't feel anything
I loved her for seven years
And now I had to let her go
Reducing my love for her
To that of a friend
Its the fate I feared
Longing to kiss those lips
just one last time
To hold her just a little longer
Then a friendly hug can allow
Wishing to dry every tear
That she'll shed
No they don't seem to understand
I'm so dead inside

Author notes

So I wasn't sure I was going to post this or the next one I'll be posting but I did...There is a third one I want to write but I'm just not sure I will be able to write it...

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  • shatteredremains
    March 26, 2007
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    ohh!! sad!! =[ *hugs* it's really a good poem though.