She pulls me in
Her eyes
They hypnotize me
Pull me
Closer and closer
There is no end
How much deeper
Will I fall in
It doesn稚 matter
I値l be happy til the end
Days go by
I知 still in your gaze
This never ending maze
I could stay
Lost forever
Since I知 with you this day
You pull me in
I could never walk away
Your loving eyes
Pull me in
They always pull me in
Closer and stronger
And fast and deeper
I never want to leave
I feel safe in this place
I lie in your embrace
Hold me close
And see me now
Look in my eyes
I値l pull you in
And keep you safe
Forever
Days go by
You池e still in my gaze
This never ending maze
You can stay
Lost forever
Since you池e with me this day
I pull you in
Pull Pull
Closer and closer
Deeper and deeper
I知 Lost in your eyes
While you池e lost in mine
I would stay this way forever
As we are together
Days go by
I知 still in your gaze
This never ending maze
I could stay
Lost forever
Since I知 with you this day
You pull me in
Pull me in
I値l pull you in
As we stay together
Forever
A contest entry
- love poems (13yrs-18yrs) by Shacadia Shay.
390 points, ended May 3, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - music & Melody in Life by mysticcrickette68.
450 points, ended March 27, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Hopelessy Romantic Guys by Ice queen 17.
300 points, ended April 5, 2007, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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really great, so I'll applaud it!
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AWESOME
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This is really great! I love every single aspect of it. The rhyming, the structure, the ...EVERYTHING! It's really awesome. Hope u win!
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Excellent entry, and each stanza interweves with the next, making this poetic piece flow so well, and the meaning hit hard, as to be able to relate to it and the message you're sending within your cries from the heart. Deep, and powerful. Great write, I like it. Thanks for sharing you, and all the best in all you do my new friend. -Timothy
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this is good, defenetly something that happens. good luck in your love life & in my contest.
--blessed be--
dark princess vampire -
good
ILIKE THIS,
NOT EXACTLY WHAT I HAVE IN MIND FOR THE
CONTEST; BUT I DO LIKE IT- ESPECIALLY "LOST IN YOUR EYES" ............. _ *ROSE*
NEED TO READ OVER RULES BETTER\?
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