Shattered
Sparkling
Shining
Shimmering
On the ground
Laying open
Exposed
Waiting
Pieces
Incapable
of
being
Cohesive
Coherent
Collective
Combined
Instead
Combusting
in the light
of
Day
Author notes
just a simple expression
Just Say Anything
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ooooh I like this. Its almost a chain-of-thought thing or simple thoughts that just seem to gently unfold in your head. I really love specific parts of this thing though, especially the END just like combust is one of my favorite words
its so powerful and then pairing it with "in the light of Day" its almost...I don't know like art/refreshing/vampire/ecstatic like every time I go over it it makes me feel a different way. I also like the part,
On the ground
Laying open
Exposed
Waiting
I love that, it totally like wraps me up in the poem and I can just begin to imagine myself there feeling this. And then I like the build up to the end also, just all the C words, describing how im not able to come together, yeah very cool. ^-^ enjoyed Much! ♥.
o.0 [fabulous]
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