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Swings and Roundabouts

It's not all swings and roundabouts
Down there, where you live
It's not all sweetness and happiness
Not all people try to forgive

It's not all swings and roundabouts
Down there, like they'd have you believe
You can't just make up your own rules
Antigravity's hard to achieve

In fact I'd say its impossible,
Down on that world, far below
That doesn't stop some people
Trying till the final blow

It's not all swings and roundabouts
Down there, down below
Its a water park you nilly
Now go on, off you go.

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  • Onionducks
    March 26, 2007
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    haha, aww that made me laugh. Nice write dude, you're a very talented writer, don't let anyone tell you different.
    The second to last line in this really caught me off guard haha i loved it!