A nice yankee girl
Meets a sweet southern guy
In the good Lord's house
Under a clear blue sky
They soon become friends
Their friendship soon blossoms
They will be friends to the end
Oh how truly Awesome!
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Friends forever!
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Nothing like god bring people together nice
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Simple, cute and very sweet! =) A very enjoyable read!
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very sweet and cute...
to the point and meticulous...
keep it up
its simplicity i sendearing -
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this is better from the first one i read keep writing sry bout the other comment but i am a truth teller -
this was a great poem very cute i hope we can be friends and i can read more of your poems
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Cute sweet nice and to the point!!! -
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awesome. that's a sweet reunion. wow- you're my age and i'm a gal.. that's coincidental. -
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This is truely sweet. Just a few things though. When talking about the good Lord, you should always cap His name. And in your second stanza.. first sentence where you have the, it should be they. But other than that, your poem is awesome. God bless you and may you have a wonderful friendship. Kassie -
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Thanks for the comment, and thanks for the corrections, I was half asleep when I typed this so I didn't pick up on the mistakes. The one that really bugs me is the fact I forgot to Cap the Lord's Name. but I have corrected it.
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