Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Haiku Fest


silence making waves
effects rippling emotion
caught in stagnate air
****
         

grapes laid out on plate
all varieties displayed
seedless court seeded
****


star-shine washed earth
crystallized light streaming hope
clouds made bright with night
****



leafs turned golden
float aimlessly till settled
one then more craft pile
****


(c) Debby Sorensen Carlson

reworked 3/25/07

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • freespirit51 gold member
    March 25, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    I love this collection of your great little Haiku's. You have such a variety of them and they are all terrific. Great work.


    • Debbysmiles gold member
      March 25, 2007
      Edit | Reply

      freespirit

      Thank you so much ! I love writing haikus. Blessings. Debby


  • Sizzle
    March 25, 2007
    Edit | Reply

    YAY

    good job.
    ilovehaikus!
    funfunfun


    • Debbysmiles gold member
      March 25, 2007
      Edit | Reply

      Sizzle

      I love haikus too ! They are a blast to write. Thank you. !! Blessings. debby