I've tied knots in my stomach to remind me of you.
I've been losing weight and losing sleep,
Running this scene, again, on repeat.
None of this seems to make sense anymore.
You've been walking on my heart.
Your steps are trampling my soul
and I can barely breathe right anymore.
I no longer have any control.
My breath hitches at the sight of you
My heart jumps and pounds it's beat.
You make my mind haze over
I feel like I may just crash into you.
You smile and I'm scarlet all over again
You touch me and I start to tremble
You speak to me and fall over you.
I've never lost control like this before.
And I like it.
A contest entry
- Three Options by Autumns Soul.
525 points, ended April 22, 2007, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 1st Round: Anything you want......:D [[Closes in 1 hour!]] by xox-lankan-xox.
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Comments
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This is great... I love the feeling you put into this...
Thank you for entering and good luck -
I recently have come to know how this feels. Its a wonderful feeling and you have expressed it well in this poem. Keep up the good work honey!
Hugs Nicole xoxoxoxo
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