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You were there

After losing a job
and losing a grandmother
I was in a daze
I was down
No one to turn to.
My second week back
Trying to do my routine
I met you...
You were special
Someone I had just met
and yet felt I could trust
You didn't let me cry on your shoulder
Nor did you comfort me
You did however
Give me a Special Friend
A friend I Can't do without
I felt down, crushed by unpreventable things
Till I met you, just knowing you
Just being around you, lifted me up
Just meeting you helped me stand again
I don't know what I would have done with out you
You did not fill a void, nor patch it up
You replaced it, with hope, love, and joy
I would be lost without you!

Thank you

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  • Violet Moodswing Greeters member
    April 4, 2007

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    It is truly wonderful to have people who don't try to fix us but instead simply are there for us during times that things are just not okay. Well done expression of true friendship.

    Best of luck in the contest.


  • Sharcu silver member
    April 3, 2007
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    I think that friends are what makes this life worth living. I'm glad you have a friend who helps you get through whatever life may through at you. A wonderful tribute to them and I hope they have read this because I'm sure they would love to see it. Thanks for entering our contest
    --Tim


  • vanityfair
    March 31, 2007
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    really sweet.
    I liked it.


  • Rosemary Stroebel silver member
    March 27, 2007

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    Thanks for entering

    Faith and the love born from this is beautiful. A lovely write, that is very inspirational. Well written.

    Let the ink flow and your fingers dance

    Rosemary


  • wishintreeUK
    March 27, 2007

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    Thank you for entering.

    Having a friend there in time of need is worth more than all the gold in the world, life often places at our feet more than we are able to bear... yet as in your case, when we have someone to stand by us, we are able to cope and look forward to a more positive future.

    Thank you for entering the contest

    ~Katie~


  • FifthDove
    March 27, 2007

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    Thanks for the entry and welcome to the site!

    How truly wonderful that such a person walked
    into your life at the right moment in time I love reading
    about perfectly timed meetings such as this. I’d like to thank
    you for this poem and for entering our contest
    Thank you very much for the entry,
    best wishes and welcome to the siteDove


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    March 26, 2007
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    Welcome to All Poetry!

    It's truly amazing how when life is at it's lowest ebb, someone can come along into our lives that becomes our saving grace. Your write shows this perfectly.Just knowing one has a friend can save a life.
    Thank you for your entry into our contest.
    Gaylene

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