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This pain

                                The things you see
                              Things you know
                        Things you will find out soon!
                                    The pain
                        The things you will encounter
                            Life can be hard
                          Yet stand tall
                                call you fat
                        call you weird
                            call you ugly
                          Just keep on going
                            You will live
                        You will be happy
                               

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    March 25, 2007

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    yea
    i like the message in this poem, you did a good job on it, it is kind of sad but i like it what is about, keep it flowing