I was tempted to wonder
When she stuck a pen in my mouth
Was I taking too much?
Had our friendship gone south?
But an honor society lady
Deserves trust and respect
So when she makes "pointed" comments
I will not object
Author notes
Interesting Night, with a friend...
A contest entry
- Calling all Poets for Poetry by Dark Whispers.
375 points, ended March 26, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Opinions, and Comments please...
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lol sounds like an accident, like she was reaching for a pen and you accidentally walked in her path as she was about to write on a pad by your mouth.
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Wow did this really happen to you? I f so wow.written very nicely.
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Almost Happened, My friend was back from break and running around like a mad woman. I dropped my pen, she picked it up and handed it to me but while not looking where she was putting it...It ended up about and inch from my mouth...Hence to poem
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