10-30-06
I feel the cold wind hit me and cry
My realization of my emptiness embodies me both in my mind and soul
The extraction of the superfluous gaze...
My name is empty.
I live;
Breathe the fresh air morning after morning
And feel nothing...
Not a heart will know of my solitude...
Of my yearning for he who is gone.
How could I do this to a creature so precious to me?
I loved him so much
My days were filled with joy of one being in love
Now stand here I with regret and remorse
My loneliness is a secret that no one knows...
He is gone
For how long; I know not.
How treacherous it is with each passing second...
I want him still...
But will he ever take me back?
Please tell me what you think
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very well written
oo, treachery..how sad, its truly a deep poem. I like this poem. Well done to you too. Thank you for the comment, i am glad you liked my poem.
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