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how could you go and give your heart to him?


how could you go and give your heart to him?
i gave you mine and stood by your side,
am i not even worth a whim?
you know for you i would have died.
so how could you give your heart to him?
was it that i wasn't good enough for you?
was it that i wasn't as good as him?

i know that you have changed and left me all alone
if i could have it my way i would change to make you gleam
now all i can do is be at my empty throne,
to sit unhappy and alone ....

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  • Shacadia Shay
    March 29, 2007

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    this is good & plan to see its about lost love, such a clear message is good. it flows nicely & has a good meaning. best of luck in your love life & in my contest.
    --Blessed be--
    Dark Princess Vampire