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Nightmare!

Verse 1

We are... your...NIGHTMARE!
We are...your FEAR...
Confide in us! We never share!
Deal us badly, we dont care!...
In the end we win anyway,
You are our advantage... Our leadway...

CHORUS

FUCKING YOU, LIKE YOU FUCKED US!
SMASHING IN YOUR HEAD!
MAKING IT DUST!
NOTHING LIKE THE THUNDER!
OF BEING HIT IN THE HEAD WITH A SLEDGE HAMMER!!!
MAKING YOU PAY!
Revenge...is...on...the...way... *fade slowly to next verse*
x2

Verse 2

Everything you ever were...
Everything you've ever said,
A LIE to get us to believe you...
Slowly making you dead...
This hate is burning in me...
BURNING WITH SWEET INSANITY!
FOREVER MORE ITS TIME TO SETTLE THE SCORE!*chorus x2* fade away to next verse

Verse 3

Slowly your life will fade away...
Your lies, cruelty, and selfish pride...
Drained away, one burning night...
We were once your best friends,
till you fucked us over,
AND THIS IS WHERE IT ENDS! *chorus x2* fade slowly away

Author notes

This is my very first song!

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  • julz09
    June 5, 2007
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    fuck yeah! this rocks!

  • bluepoeticflame
    March 26, 2007

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    Very cool and very passionate. Would love to hear this put to music. I love how the "we" is never definitely revealed, it is open to the reader or listeners interpretation, which is very cool. Great job and keep it up and thank you for your great comment on my poem "Another Bar Song".