You're always there for me
when I went to get my wisdom teeth out
when I was going through a hard time
No matter what I'm going through,
you're always there
taking care of me
You get me things when I don't ask for them
and most of the time
I don't even know about it
You just constantly surprise me
with your love
and I couldn't be more thankful
Even though I do feel like like I don't deserve everything
but I'm glad you do it
because it shows how much you love me
I know that you'll never hurt me
and I know we'll always be together
and happy
No matter what life throws at us
we'll always get through it
and we'll always be happy
I love you so much
for everything you did
and continuing to do
And I just can't thank you enough
I wish I could do something in return
but all I have is my love
That might be enough for you
but to me
it's not
Until I get more
that's all that I have
I love you
Author notes
This is about my boyfriend, Justin.
A contest entry
- Coffee's Picture Prompt~ Come On In!!!! by coffeeangel316.
525 points, ended September 13, 2007, 12 entries
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wonderful write. thank you for entering
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beautiful
alot of love expressed in this poem. this weather worn heart isn't completly calloused to how you feel. i can remember such feelings as well. your message was well recieved and congradulations on finding somebody who makes you happy.
Good Write and God Bless
The Unrequited Writer
Ben B. -
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I'm glad you like the poem and thank you. I don't know if I replied to this or not because I've been gone so long.
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that is a wonderful poem... isn't it great being in Love?... well, I only have one suggestion... line 24 would prolly flow better if you said, "and what you continue to do"... but it is just a suggestion... you don't have to change it... smiles... well, keep up the good work... I can't wait to read more...
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Thanks, Sis. I'll change it later.
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