I hopelessly hide
From everyone i know
Hoping that my true emotions
Will never ever show
Hopelessly hiding
That i am upset
Of things from my past
That i always regret
Tears that have fallen
Loved ones that have died
All these things are connected
To why all these months i have cried
I hide myself away
Hoping all of it is fake
Closing my eyes and counting to ten
To find it is real when i awake
I hide to
Close off my true emotions so they are locked away
And i try to keep it like that
Each and everyday
I hide myself away
To try and move on
So that way
I can continue to be strong
My life has fallen
Into a pit of tears
Because of the lives and memories
That i once held dear
Please tell me what you think
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gr, cupids target took my compliment lol, anywho, just know this is a beautiful peace
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thank you so much i appreciate that
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wow this poem gets 11 out of ten 4 sure i like how u chaneled ur pain into something so beautiful
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thank you very much that means a lot to me. i do my best poems through depressing and sad things in my life
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wow that is so true.... I tend to do that myself... hide away...from feelings...even those close to me...but this is such a good write i like it mucho amounts.
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thank you
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Great write hun. Great write. The 3rd set of lines from the bottom in the first line you could have it
"I hide, to close off my true emotions,
So they are locked away..."
Idk, just a suggestion. But it was a really awesome write. I loved it! keep it up. *hugs* -Nick
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thank you
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I really like the rhym and flow to this. It's also really powerful.
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thank you very much
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