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Yearning or burning?

Do not touch it
Be aware
The Lord has eyes
That can stare
Into your soul
At your desire
So touch it not
Or feel Hells fire!

Sins of flesh
Are very bad
If you falter
He will be mad
He punishes those
Who feel their own
So leave your private
Parts alone!

Masturbation
The Devil's work
And so is oral
Don't be a jerk
Trust in Jesus
Let Him guide
To His law
You must abide!




Author notes

"I'm a Jesus-freak"
I have recently converted, but my heart is pure and my words are true.
Praise be to Jesus for guiding my hand!

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  • sarajaneUK
    July 7, 2007

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    ummm, i wonder if he still gets pissed off if you jerk someone else off instead, a kinda mutual double whammy, a helping hand, so to speak.


  • Gay Butch Fairy
    April 7, 2007

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    Tongue in cheek and one hesitates to ask in which cheek. You could do with a few apostrophes here but perhaps you were too excited at the time to bother.


  • Snakehips Pete
    April 1, 2007

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    This is wonderful, exactly what God wants. I salute thee O Dear Poet! The world says to just give in and get your fingers working but God knows that is sinful! I pray you will get what you deserve!


  • RuLives4GodOnly
    March 26, 2007

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    This is woderful, EXACTLY what I wanted. You express the dangers of doing this very well. I salute dear poet! The world says to just give in for God gave us these pleasures for a reason but, I believe that although we have those pleasures, we should strive to do what is good and right and holy and true. Very awesome poem, I pray God blesses you!


    • Deliverance
      March 26, 2007
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      Thank you for your wonderful words of praise.
      I hope you found this helpful at your current time of need.
      When you need a hand, turn to Jesus and he will be there.


  • Laura
    March 26, 2007

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    ohhhh i love this

    now this has to be one of the funniest poems i ahve ever read well done love this is bloody amazing xxxxx


    • Deliverance
      March 26, 2007

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      Hell!
      That is what awaits those who give in to the sins of the flesh.
      When Jesus was nailed on the cross,
      When he felt the hard penetration of Longinus' spear in his Holy flesh, and felt the extasy...
      He did it for us.
      Thank you for your wonderful comment sister Laura, I hope one day we can pray together.


  • Layla Thomas
    March 25, 2007
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    interesting twist

    not what I was expecting

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