Dearest Yuna,
Don't cry for me.
I will come back to thee.
We may be worlds apart.
I still love you in my heart.
I miss you, my sweet Yuna.
I miss your soft brown hair.
I miss those beautiful blue eyes.
Let me show you how much I care.
I swear to you, I tell no lies.
I didn't mean to do you harm.
I wish I could take you in my arms.
Have hope for me.
Convince you to see,
that it is you I miss.
How I wish, for one more kiss.
Your loving,
Tidus
A contest entry
- Final Fantasy Fans...this Contest is for YOU!! by grrlshadow.
600 points, ended March 27, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wonderful and tender.
A classical theme that makes the poignancy even stronger but not overpowering. I like this type of sensitive and sincere writing as it leaves a feeling of the poem's melody and one doesn't want to read more until it has eased. Good work.
Bazza
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A sensitive letter of love from Tidus to Yuna, Romeo and Juliet style, softly sweet and romantic,
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awwww this is fabulous!! i love the form of a love letter from Tidus to Yuna...oh marvelous!! "Have hope for me.
Convince you to see,
that it is you I miss.
How I wish, for one more kiss." this contest gets better and better with every entry...this freakin rocks!!! thank you so much for this entry, and best of luck in the contest!!! right on!
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delightful
I do believe the person will return for Yuna, and sure she will be so happy. Nice job.
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