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Possibilitys

Possible futures,
Swirling,
Falling like rain,
I used to live in fear, but now you're here.

Possible outcomes,
Mixed,
Re-arranged,
I'm glad you're here, now don't shead a tear.

Possible death,
Memory,
The song of Fayth,
This is my story.

Five strong,
Soon to be less,
Blond haired boy,
Soon to be gone.

This is our story,
Soon to be over.

Author notes

so I made a desperate attempt at rhyming in the first few stanzas, but I gave up after wards heh.

So this started out as a poem about Tidus from FFX but it turned into one about all of the party....well enjoy

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  • grrlshadow
    March 25, 2007

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    lol...well why not? have one about the whole party!! is such a fun contest! i'm loving this!!! i like your poem alot...short and sweet, and loyal to the Fayth...love it!!! thank you so much!! best of luck in the contest...
    (a few corrections though, if you don't mind... possibilities, "I'm glad you're here, now don't shed a tear." and "I used to live in fear, but now you're here.")


    • monkeyman767
      March 26, 2007
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      Oh dear my spelling never was the best but those mistakes were just terrible, thank you very much...being edited as we speak