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Surrounded in a world
full of pain and hate.
But it’s that girl
that makes
me forget everything.
that makes me think.
I now see a new part
of the world I’ve never seen.
I open up my heart
and I know what it means.
But is it the girl
that’s inside of me
that opens up this world
so I can see.
That makes me go closer
to the edge.
and in the moment where I feel
myself about to fall
I don’t.
and I realize
I'm about to free fall
into the unknown.
where I am no longer
alone.
In this moment I am better.
Open my eyes to feel
the breeze on my skin
I'll show you the real
person.
Reveal to the world
the girl
inside of me.
The one
I hide
from you
The hidden mask
you never thought of.
The hidden task
to not fall in love.

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  • aloneintheworld
    March 28, 2007
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    wow tihs is really good. i'm glad you found someone. kepp it up.

  • livestrong7
    March 26, 2007

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    wow, this was really good kay... of course you always write good poems so why shouldn't this one be any different.. ttyl