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Her sword is unsheathed
She whips it around her head
In attack and strikes

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    March 25, 2007

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    ohhhhh, i think i get it after reading the first coment, i was confused there, this is good, keep it flowing


  • Amera gold member
    March 25, 2007

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    Very good with deep underlying meaning; I’m impressed, not too many people realize that a haiku should not have a title.

    Love,
    Amera