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When I Wish Upon a Star

When I wish upon a star
I always wish for you
I know that really sounds cliche
But that is what I do

I wish for you to like me
I wish for you to care
I wish for you to think of me
Even though I'm rarely there

I wish for you to wonder
What I'm doing every day
I wish for you to wish
That I didn't live so far away

I wish for you to think of me
Every night in your dreams
And I wish more than anything
For you to wish for me

'Cause when I wish upon a star
I always wish for you
And all my wishes break my heart
'Cause I know they won't come true

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  • Little Miss Mozart
    March 30, 2007

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    "Wishing only wounds the heart". Sigh... but you can't help what you wish. So I'm baked. grr...
    Great poem, Ker. I mostly wish I could be in Bluffton now. THe people at my school are so... common. No integrity, most of them.

    Katie


  • Glass Heart
    March 29, 2007
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    Aww, Ker. I wish the same thing every day. Amazing poem!! Good luck in the contest!!!


  • HannahBrookeXD
    March 27, 2007

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    Oh my gosh!! I read that comment, and I thought it was from will, and I was like, whoa!! haha. Anyway. I definately agree with "elsa"! Gorgeous, and emotional. ~hannah~


  • the walls have ears
    March 26, 2007
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    woops! that was elsa!

  • the walls have ears
    March 26, 2007

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    omg! this is so... tender! gosh it's so simple and beautiful. and sad. I love how straightforward this is. YOU'RE ONTO SOMETHING WITH THIS KIND OF WRITE! bewtiful!<33


  • Welcome-To-Hell
    March 25, 2007

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    This is an awesome write and a wonderful wish and want to wish for someone and hope they are wishing for you too but alas knowing it cant come true excellent write best of luck to you in the contest

  • sexycowboy
    March 25, 2007

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    wow

    thats amazing dont give up wishing for them you dont know it wont come true keep fighting for the one you love and you will never regert it

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