Summer Palm Beach, warm winds coming. Array of hot sqourching sun, protect from water on land. Absorb the smell of fresh Apirl rain in July, as the people relax on the porch in a daze.
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Needs more not finished...
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Comments
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Wow what great imagery. This peice was kind of short though, it would be nice if it were longer, you could really do wonders with it! Great write though!
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kool
i liked it...very kool...i like the part about relax on the porch in a daze...reminds me of my summers and how they use to be...lol...ttul bro
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Good...
I needed to catch more attention in the end so i'm probly going to finish it in a few days when i can come up with something better... most of my other peoms were better before i took them off i might just put them back on...
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