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Final Prayer

As I fall on bended knee,
My fate is sealed, my heart the key.
Though your blade ends my life,
I know I can rely on cloud strife.  
My wish, a world filled with peace
My hope, a man who's life is leased
With healing wind and staff I stand
Watching over all the land
My people once communed with her
Now as the last of them, I am the cure
Meteor meet holy, the final light
Now this world can win the fight.

Author notes

this is about Aeris' final moments, and her fervent prayer to the world.

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  • blaiyne
    March 29, 2007

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    I noticed that you added me on your favorites list, so i decided to come check out some of your work.

    I have to say I know absolutly nothing about Final Fantasy, but I still really enjoyed reading this poem. Great work. I can see that you're a very talented poet, and I'll continue reading your pieces.

    Best wishes
    Blaiyne


  • Dolphin Shaktiheart
    March 27, 2007

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    That's why I can never get past Disc 1, I'm powerful enough, but i just can't go into the cetra land and into the shell temple and...


  • grrlshadow
    March 25, 2007

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    YAY!!! Aeris! oh man, this is beautiful!! thank you so much!! i loved it! at this rate, i'm gonna have to add more HM's and spend a long while reading and rereading each entry...Best of luck in the contest!!! and thank you! every entry i get is special to me...I will keep them all!!