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Is This What It Means to Write Abstract?

Confronted yet, traversed,

these litheless limbs stare

outwardly for signs of legibility

 

And, still reconciliation had not

been completely defined

 

Trepid, this puppet becomes

lost in stagnation; voiced

silence quenched reveries 
upon wayward attributes

of pillowed observation

 

Blind imaginations were

finalized nearby as life's

wooden concrete solidified

with memory   

 

However, this ink

drew upon an endlessness

of self configuation  

In a list

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  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    April 15, 2007

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    Well Done

    I am so pleased to see this piece recognized. Truly a delight and a pleasure to read. Congratulations on your award. ~Pamela


  • masterblaster gold member
    April 13, 2007

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    Hi, you never disapoint me and again you looked very deep into the pic, facinating write and loved the take on the pic, I do not know how many comments I will be able to do tonight, it has been a very heavy week, I just hope I do not come under attack from our friend ,he came back yet again with accusations and insults, I have cancelled my favorites list,lol,great poem, all the best in the comp, hugs Di


  • windhover3 gold member
    April 9, 2007

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    not sure what to do with "life's wooden concrete"... but a sense of atrophy and entrenchment come through clearly. Yo


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    March 25, 2007

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    i didn't get a word of it yet, it made me feel good that i read it, you did a great job, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest