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Glossopharyngeal Love

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A tongue that’s out in the night
passed by my knees by second sight
my body quaked with carnal delight
her lips take flight, her lips take flight

Dark lover waited by the grave
within the wind her hair would wave
The primal thought she did crave
her tongue would wave,  her tongue would wave

Beneath the moonlight we would prance
held forever within the trance
with this sin she would take a chance
her tongue would dance, her tongue would dance

Great mystery as you can see
her wagging tongue beneath the tree
thrusting deep in the mouth of me
her tongue is free, her tongue is free

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

The monotetra is a new poetic form developed by Michael Walker. Each stanza contains four lines in monorhyme. Each line is in tetrameter (four metrical feet) for a total of eight syllables. What makes the monotetra so powerful as a poetic form, is that the last line contains two metrical feet, repeated. It can have as few as one or two stanzas, or as many as desired.

Stanza Structure:

Line 1: 8 syllables; A1
Line 2: 8 syllables; A2
Line 3: 8 syllables; A3
Line 4: 4 syllables, repeated; A4, A4

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  • MissStranger
    December 19, 2007

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    this is what i call a poem "2-inches-close-to-masterpiece"!!!wonderful job!my words are simply useless!thank you for entering and good luck in the contest!your poem made my day!


  • grannyeri gold member
    April 20, 2007

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    Poets can write about anything and everything in any form. What a great form you have chosen here, and what an amazing graphic to accompny this poem. Tried one of these before - all about the Mona Lisa - nothing quite as moving as thing one though...LOL


    • Amera gold member
      April 21, 2007
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      LOL, thanks, this was for a contest. The graphic was provided... I wasn't really proud of this.


  • blueyez
    March 26, 2007
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    One word... YUMMY!


  • Myth Of Twilight
    March 26, 2007
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    this poem is sweet i love it a romatic tike greak work loved it


  • MysticAngelEyes
    March 25, 2007

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    Wow what a lovely write, so descriptive and full of vivid images, and I love the pic goes so well with this poem.


  • PerVirtuous
    March 25, 2007

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    Son of a bitch! I was thinking of Kristin and you while I was reading it. What a coincidence! This is Hawt and hilarious, the double HH! You deserve more than three bunnies for this, but I'll get back to you about that. I'll wait in line just behind Lane. Three bunnies who look exactly like that when they clean themselves.


  • JohnnyD gold member
    March 25, 2007

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    Talented tongues can do many things, spend a week in Thailand if you don't believe me.

    however talented tongues remind me more of Black Elk the Sioux Holy Man:

    as he lamented;

    "our dead never would forget
    The beautiful world that gave them being."
    "The rivers, the mountains, the lakes and bays
    That the white man came to take away -

    "And when the last Red Man has perished
    and the memory of my people becomes . . .
    just myth portrayed in the white mans lies
    These shores will throng
    with the invisible dead of my tribe..."

    But truth will win out - and its no myth
    that Elk expressed and here described
    First in Indian dance, then documentation
    He has made indelible the history of his proud nation

    Ironically when Lieutenant Custer disobeyed his orders
    And attacked instead of favoring peace
    And sealed the fate of the Indian race
    He made "The Little Big Horn" his last disaster

    Outnumbered by the combined Indian Nation
    Bent on revenge for the many Indian deaths
    And protecting the tens of thousands in their camp
    Two Thousand plus warriors came from every side

    There was no stopping Crazy Horse and Chief Hunkapa
    Leading the Cheyenne, plus Sans Arcs, Miniconjoux
    Oglala Sioux, Blackfeet and the Sioux,
    It took twenty minutes to annihilate "Yellow Hairs" Cavalry

    Reno and Benteen arrived far too late
    Finally sealing Custer fate -
    But this massacre took away all sympathy
    And Custer's Ghost got revenge at "Wounded Knee"

    The Politicians plans for peace - took on a frown
    And orders came to hunt the Indian down
    Crazy Horse, Sitting Bull - and White Feather
    All names that will surely live forever

    All part of history of which they can be proud
    But better you don't speak too loud
    For the invisible dead are not far away
    And ghosts might come to have their say

    "Tongues" are for many things, but the most important is to speak the truth. And far more interesting than a longue lashing in thighland??

    JD


  • Spiritvision angel
    March 25, 2007

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    LOL, the tongue is to funny! This is truely a original write that I enjoyed reading!! You couldnt have matched the piture to the words any better.


  • Dalaney gold member
    March 25, 2007

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    I'll get back to you on this later...

    I'm cleaning off the saliva from my screen.

    Love, Lane


    • JohnnyD gold member
      March 25, 2007
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      Black Elk the Sioux Holy Man:

      as he lamented with his tongue;

      "our dead never would forget
      The beautiful world that gave them being."
      "The rivers, the mountains, the lakes and bays
      That the white man came to take away -

      "And when the last Red Man has perished
      and the memory of my people becomes . . .
      just myth portrayed in the white mans lies
      These shores will throng
      with the invisible dead of my tribe..."


    • Amera gold member
      March 25, 2007
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      lmao... I can't stop laughing. This was a contest picture but Kristin was on my mind when I wrote it.


  • Desire gold member
    March 25, 2007

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    Oh My-

    Powerful piece You have penned my Friend and what a sight to set the eyes on
    I first took hold of the might tongue~~
    and went Whoa Momma
    Beautiful form You have written and I might give this one a whirl in the future
    Loved It!!

    Best wishes to You in the contest
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~

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