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Wind-Swept Chimney

Missing image
Cross bares wall to show its root
as wave in art, so misbegotten,

when fingers arc
in torching tempest,
while tracing skin in pillow talk
to page much whiter,
without a meter,
and eyes stare blank in frozen letter,
hanging head too limp to focus.


Where lies word, in way to love,

when every judge
is Jester’s jury
chasing shadow
to spell charade
as laugh at law
in living desert?


We have shed archaic armor
to gather flowers in our dungeon,

drinking blood
that drips from ceiling,
spinning fan to count in hours,
a less than lively form of rhythm.


So cut the cord,

and feel in freedom,
a terror
rising with the morning,
as such a shock in bonded beauty,
waking to the eastern sunshine,
cracked in cleavage,
sipping shadow,

blinded by the truth in telling,
of what once was
to know epiphany.


Then, draw you pen,

and joust with evil, lying dormant,
as silent fingers,
splitting block
without a stoke
to sound in yelp,

those first few sounds
of art creating.


And so it goes,
as blood will out,

when fire veins in pumping organ,
the blush in genius raging forward,

as line builds cone
to rise before you,

until erection spurts in flame,

from ancient rooftops
of wind swept chimney.











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  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    April 15, 2007

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    Congratulations

    Truly this is a work of art and so deserving of recognition in this contest. A complete pleasure to read and enjoy. Congratulations on your award. Deserving of this and much more. ~Pamela


  • masterblaster gold member
    April 13, 2007

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    Hi, a very good write, unique, it was a pleasure read, so many takes on a pic, facinating what people see in a pic, I hope to get this comp judged on Sunday, so many great poems and this is great, all the best in the comp,hugs Di


  • Titus gold member
    March 30, 2007

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    greatness inspired

    This one shows for me what is expected of free verse, and is a prime example for classic introduction, this one is a piece of master oration.


  • wolfspiritguide gold member
    March 25, 2007

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    this is chilling, i got goosebumps...

    art
    art
    art

    never fear the inner demons that lie in wait for morning light, instead embrace all that you are, and once were, using unremembered ancient knowledge gathered throughout times forgotten to speak with wounded word upon pages staring blankly, bleakly and share the art with which words and worlds create, from you, this human vessal of soul contained.


  • klassy lassy
    March 25, 2007

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    heart of flame

    exume
    ancient tomb
    where custom buries
    every living treasure
    to hold in faulty hand
    should soulwing waver
    cold confines of death

    where nothing breathes
    the airless flume

    not even
    echo

    fly
    sweet pinion,
    wing to feather

    unsinged windsongs
    measure ether, names
    bloom of rose,
    forge golden letter,
    root burning bush
    in flames
    forever

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