Wishing to falling stars
Never did I believe
Every time I thought
What could a star give?
And I'll be able to live
My life without sending any prayers to stars.
But I don't know
What has happened to me now.
Every night I'm waiting
For a star to fall.
Sleeps have gone far away
Dreams have also run away
Since you separated your way.
And now I long to find
A star falling from the sky.
So that I can make a wish to the shooting star
To bring you back in my life forever.
A contest entry
- When You Wish Upon A Star by Welcome-To-Hell.
750 points, ended April 7, 2007, 29 entries
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Great poem. I really like this "Sleeps have gone far away Dreams have also run away." When we lose someone, this is how many of us feel. I am glad I read this.
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what to say??? nothing! as usual great!!! good luck!
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now what? do u wanna say my poem has made u dumb? it is more than so much appreciation. however...thanks.
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Terrific piece my friend. I love this excellent idea of wishing on a star for the one you love to return. Great job and good luck in the contest.
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Thnaks for so much appreciation my dear. thanks a lot.
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Wow good write and a good wish to wish someone back in your life to stay best of luck to you in the contest
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Thanks a lot for reading and commenting.
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