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"Pants"

Fragrant black leather
snugged taut across those sweet
thighs hips ass
inviting touch caress

warm living flesh beneath those pants
begging to be free
demanding to be stroked
with skin to skin

perfection in perfume
your sensual musk complimented
by the warm earthy tones
of leather
breathing you deep into my chest
holding a moment memory fantasy
instilling a mere fragment
of your reality into my soul

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  • nichtmich silver member
    August 26

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    You amaze me with your diversity! Sensual stranger on a bus, random sights and smells that linger far after the mundane ride is over. People watchers see the most interesting things, they are the lucky ones. The imagery is superb and leaves one in a pleasant daydream. Thank you for lifting my spirits today.


  • Faithbound gold member
    June 5

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    I am sorry. I forgot to ban pre-writes. I am only removing because of that. You are welcome to enter a fresh one.

  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    February 1

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    " warm living flesh beneath those pants
    begging to be free
    demanding to be stroked
    with skin to skin ".

    WoW I love this piece.
    Great writing, really great writing
    Joyce

  • natchstucco
    February 1

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    nicely written with just a dab of erotica. I like the ladies who make me guess . They are the most challenging and welcoming.


  • Brazos silver member
    February 1

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    Visuality is one thing, but who can forget the fragrance? I often think that what we smell is more important than what we see. Her musk, leather, the shampoo in her hair...will most likely still be with you when you have forgotten the visual image.

    Brazos


  • ennovy silver member
    January 30

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    This from the heart and it rocks. You gave us a very sexy picture of what most me want. Great job done here very classy write.......write on!...novy


  • Ms Sexy silver member
    January 29
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    hot hot

  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    January 29

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    ooooh hot hot hot
    i definately enjoyed this piece
    thanks for sharing!

    tasha


  • honey bear
    April 1, 2007

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    this is a very beautiful write, hot, sensual and longing.
    thank you for entering and good luck in the contest with this wonderful write

  • positive anarchy
    March 25, 2007

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    Loved how you described beauty not as untouchable innocence, but a little like rock and roll...sexy, sensual, and in leather

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