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The Darkness Within Me

I look at what the people have become
How far could they fall
To sail the darkness of the cosmos with this insignificant planet as my vessel
My dream is to revive the legend of Jenova
The human race has become a bunch of pathetic, pussywhipped insects
I will always haunt your dreams and exist in your nightmares
Everytime you turn around you will see my face
My blade will soon curdle with the blood of all humans
They will girdle and sufficate the lifestream
As my blade meets yours you ask how I always appear
You of all people should know Cloud
I am the very darkness that exists inside your soul
I am the shadow that is constantly by your side
Soon your life will cower before my blade, just as Aeris' did
Remember that I am what you've always wished to be
I am stronger,faster, and better that you can dream of
You, Cloud are an insect, a pawn controlled by the ghosts of your past
That is why when you look in the mirror you don't see yourself
But you see the shimmer of my silver hair
I am the elite, the true SOLDIER.

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  • AshesFromFire
    June 18, 2007
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    I'll leave a comment when you put what I asked for in te authors box!


  • Dolphin Shaktiheart
    March 27, 2007

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    "Who am I???? Get out of my mind!!!!" Cloud thrusts the blade deeper, impaling himself as Sephiroth tumbles into the Mako Core.

  • Sweet musings
    March 25, 2007
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    This line in your poem just jumped out at me."I am the very darkness that exist inside your soul" I just love it. This made me feel that darkness that you say is within you. (psssst I'm whispering ...."I know it is not really there within you." lol )


  • grrlshadow
    March 25, 2007

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    wooo go Sephiroth!!! hehe i was wondering when i would get a Sephi "Remember that I am what you've always wished to be
    I am stronger,faster, and better that you can dream of
    You, Cloud are an insect, a pawn controlled by the ghosts of your past
    That is why when you look in the mirror you don't see yourself" I like this...even though I adore Cloud *grumble* you did a fantastic job here! All the menace and malice that is Sephi...in words...YAY! well done! thank you for entering this, and best of luck to you in the contest!! "I am the very darkness that exists inside your soul
    I am the shadow that is constantly by your side" shivers!!!

    ( sufficate = suffocate )