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Not a poem, more like thoughts.

Why does everyone think I'm so perfect?
I have my down falls too.
I have HUGE down falls.
He is one of my down falls.
But I love this down fall.
Or do I not? Why am I so
pressured to love? I hate this
I hate it all. She is everything
he wants. She is everything he
needs. But She is everything I'm not.
She likes him, He doesn't like her.
Or does he? Ahh,
This is so hard.
Just slow down and think about what
I'm going to do bring all the bad thoughts
back into my head.
I just wish I could
Let go of my problem...

Please tell me what you think

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  • ForeverNightMusic
    October 26, 2007

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    i like this poem a lot an even if ur not PERFECT ... ur perfect the way u r my love ( if that makes sence ) haha

  • Pale Lady
    March 31, 2007

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    very good

    Every feeling, every fustrationpulls and then push and pulls again. Its a rollercoaster adn you pulled it off to place the feeling in a poem well done!


  • KeepingTime
    March 25, 2007

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    Ohhh... I love you.
    Your amazing.
    Everyone has downfalls.
    I like your thoughts.
    So much more positive than mine!!
    ah haha