Break me down,I can't get any shorter
Rest your words of altruism upon yourself
Every piece of my being is just like you
Voice your opinions yes,but do not judge me for my height
I am one and myself,my heart beats the same as yours
Tell me why I am so different in your eyes
You may be older and taller,yet I am just like you.
A contest entry
- FOR 13 & UNDER ONLY ~ SELECT A TITLE! by Kiddie Contests.
450 points, ended May 6, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Eloquence in Brevity by RatherImaginative.
1400 points, ended July 31, 2007, 29 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Ages 13 & Under ONLY ~ Prewrite Heaven by Amunet Wolfbane.
525 points, ended August 24, 2007, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Fantastic!
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I love the potential double meaning within this piece: it could be about children, or about poetry.
"Voice your opinions yes,but do not judge me for my height" I love this line. Thanks so much for entering my contest! -
Great acrostic you've done here. Well done and good luck in this contest.
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Great poem. You've used the title perfectly. This gives a lot of message and has been done in a very effective way. Keep it up. You;re doing great!! Best of luck in my contest sweety.
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