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Alone

Gloomy paths are walked about
Life has many roads
For never to see the light
Up ahead far beyond reach
Are beautiful colors of light
For never to walk in a righteous path
For never to have felt loved
The beauty is within reach
Look ahead and embrace the light
Don't look back on the desolate road
Look ahead to the promises of love
If no one has ever loved you in your life
Know that God has loved you before time
Walk in the warm embrace for you were never
alone

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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    April 23, 2007

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    This is just beautiful, I love the way this flowed so tenderly, well done on this wonderful piece

    Thanks for taking the time to enter, I wish you the very best of luck

    Karen


  • bethan-gaze
    March 28, 2007

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    Amen! So true. What's done is done - best to keep our eyes on the here and now and the road ahead, rather than stray backwards. Lovely.