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"Brothers"

BROTHERS"
Brothers are supposed to stick together
I've always heard blood is thicker then water
Fuck i'd still do life for my brother
But the punk is afraid of our step father
The same man who has made his life better
The same man who pulled us all out of the gutter
But none of this shit really matters
Because my brother isn't a true rider
He'll stand in front of a jury and point his finger
Really i could look past all that
OTHERS"But not when i'm disrespected for some lame crap
3years in prison isn't far from enough
I cant force him to visit he say's tough
For some reason i will always remember this
Regardless my love for my brother is faultless
The things i would do for him are endless
O well everyone makes mistakes
Mine was expecting him to do something he would'nt
His was thinking i was fake
Hay he might not have been told so,does'nt remember
Brothers are supposed to stick together
For me blood is and always will be thicker then water.
Jordon i wrote this because it was a way to vent
I put myself in prison,so none of this should really matter
  love you baby bro

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  • poet2angels gold member
    March 25, 2007

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    beautiful

    This made me cry...It was so real....
    I have always heard that too about brothers and I am happy that you have such a bond with your brother that after everything, you can say what you said at the end....This poem touched me and I am glad you could get this off your chest...
    Awesome poem....
    Lynda