Walking down the path,
looking for pretty-looking pebbles.
Stopping along the way,
To sample nature's grown berries.
Our berry-filled baskets
Shine in the sun
As we head back home
Scenting mint leaves
Along the way.
Author notes
option 3
A contest entry
- Sibling Love by Abidoodle333.
700 points, ended April 28, 2007, 13 entries
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Comments
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Aw that's sweet! Just like summer. Great job!
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This is a simple but sweet piece. Oh those days when we were innocent. I remember when I used to collect conkers down at the park, oh the good old days!
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This was a very beautiful write and a pleasure to read. Thank you so much for entering this wonderful piece in my contest, and good luck!
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this is a cute wonderful poem!
Good job and great luck
Thanx for entering
Abidoodle -
I diddo Saosin I miss my sister
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this is a very sweet poem i can actually picture it in my mind
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